Services for Writers

My Approach

Compassion

Sharing your work with strangers can be scary and intimidating. Offering your writing for critique can be a painful process. My goal is to encourage you with gentle feedback. I’m critical, but I’m nice about it.

Knowledge

I’m a certified book coach, and I’m an author myself. I’ve published six novels and three novellas. I know how to write a book start to finish, and I’m here to guide you. Are you starting with an idea? I can help you turn it into a novel. Do you have a first draft? I can help you polish it. Do you think you have a finished project ready for publication or querying? I can help you make sure. 

Enthusiasm

I’m a coach because I love it. I get excited about your work, and your ideas. I’m not here to ghostwrite, I’m here to cheer for you, encourage you, and celebrate with you when you finally have a copy of your novel in your hands.

Book Coaching

One Hour Brainstorming
  • For previous/current clients only
  • A one hour zoom meeting to help you get unstuck 
  • Does not include pages review

$100

Coaching
  • 6 deadlines, up to 20 pages/5000 words each
  • Inline comments on submission
  • 45 minute zoom meeting per deadline to discuss feedback, next steps, and brainstorming
  • Flexible deadlines/scheduling, but must complete within six months

$900

Manuscript Evaluations

First Look

Are you a new writer who has never been brave enough to show your work to anyone? This is for you. 

Send me your first 2500 words.

You will get:

  • Three positive things you're doing well
  • Three next steps
  • One twenty minute zoom call

This is not a critique. This is a welcome. Showing your work for the first time is always difficult and nerve wracking. Let me help start you out on a positive and encouraging note.

$100

First Fifty Pages (12,500 words)
  • Inline comments throughout the document
  • An editorial letter
  • 45 minute zoom meeting to discuss the feedback and next steps

$500

Full Manuscript
  • Ideal for someone with a completed manuscript that is fairly polished
  • Inline comments throughout the document
  • An editorial letter
  • One hour zoom meeting to discuss the feedback, next steps, and brainstorming
  • .025 per word, minimum $500
  • Example 80,000 words = $2000

$0.025/word

FAQ

What genres do you work with?

I love working with women’s fiction, contemporary romance (any steam level), and thrillers, especially female-led domestic thrillers.

I love multi-POV, dual timelines, unreliable narrators, and dark secrets.

I’m not a good fit for sci-fi or fantasy, but I can refer you to another coach.

I’m also not a good fit for projects that are heavily religious or include anti-LGBTQ themes.

Do you use AI?

No. I do not use any AI when I am evaluating your work. I will never upload your work into any AI software. All feedback you receive is directly from me, in my words. 

Do you guarantee that I can get published?

Of course not. Anyone who guarantees publication is probably going to try to sell you a package with a vanity press.

Publishing is a competitive industry. My job is to help you get your project in as good a shape as you can, for whichever path you choose to pursue.

Do I have to have publishing as an end goal?

No. While I enjoy working with authors who are pursuing a publishing path, I also love working with hobbyists. Here’s a secret: you can write a book for fun. You don’t have to publish, and if you do publish, you don’t have to market. This can be something you’re doing for yourself.

Email
sara@saralafontain.com

 

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