"Sara’s feedback was prompt, detailed, and incredibly insightful. She was able to see through my half-formed ideas to a much more polished story, and she asked great questions that helped me grow a fully-fleshed story."

"Sara’s editorial letter provided me a clear roadmap as I started revisions on my manuscript. Where she noted problems with the plot, she provided concrete suggestions I could implement. Most helpful for me was Sara’s feedback on how to improve interiority and bring my character’s emotions and motivation onto the page. At the end, I had a stronger manuscript and more confidence in my writing."

"Less than a month after I gave her my manuscript, I got feedback - both a very long, detailed editorial letter and also line edits throughout my entire manuscript. It was the most specific, action-oriented, detailed editorial letter I'd ever received (and included ideas on genre for queries). Her follow up ZOOM call was even more helpful. Every single thing Sara said in her line edits or editorial letter was issue-oriented to fix a specific lack in FAITHLESS. I cannot express how helpful that is! Gone were the "Maybe Character A should have a little more X,Y,Z" generalities from those (expensive) prior editors/coaches, and in were specific, problem-solving ideas like "This chapter needs to do X,Y,Z and here are three suggestions for how to make that happen." Additionally, she was the only editor/coach who finally helped me realize I was querying in the incorrect genre! Finally, it was obvious she'd read the entire MS (twice!) unlike engaging in the practice I now realize is common with many developmental editors and coaches, which is more of a skim-and-skip pattern of reading. To top everything off, Sara is kind, has exquisite follow-up and meets her deadlines. Her fee is the only money I've spent on my novel/career at this point that I feel was well spent. I only wish I'd found her sooner. I cannot recommend her enough."